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guokeete 于2008-12-7 05:07 写道：

看了2，3节后感觉有点扯了。废话多
且重复描述主角，似乎很沉默。
要表现不要描述。失望

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guokeete 于2008-12-7 04:51 写道：

看了第一节，还不错。情节设定可以
如果以后主角不“狂暴”的话，整体应该会不错。

快更新 等不急了

hyt124115153 于2008-7-8 11:30 写道：

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lc4932056 于2008-7-8 10:30 写道：

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hyt124115153 于2008-7-6 10:15 写道：

感觉像网游小说 是不是网游和魔幻结合的?

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